+2 translations of old posts

Author: maurovanetti

_drafts/2006-10-29-how-large-proletariat-en.md

@@ -4,11 +4,11 @@ title: Doh! (a game we invented)
 tags: games en
 original: doh
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-One summer many years ago, by the sea, I invented **a variant of Connect 4** together with Errico De Lisi and Giuseppe Sguera. We called this game **Doh!**, in honor of Homer Simpson, of course.
+During a summer holiday by the sea, many years ago, I invented **a variant of Connect 4** together with Errico De Lisi and Giuseppe Sguera. We called this game **Doh!**, after Homer Simpson, of course.
 
-Back from vacation, I wrote the rules of this game on a [FidoNet](http://www.fidonet.org/) area that dealt with board games and played a few distance games with other users of that primitive amateur network (at the time I didn't have access to the Internet yet, especially considering that my modem ran at 2400 baud).
+Back from vacation, I wrote the rules of this game on a [FidoNet](http://www.fidonet.org/) area that dealt with board games and played a few distance games with other users of that primitive amateur network -- at the time I didn't have access to the Internet yet, especially considering that my modem ran at 2400 baud.
 
-Years later, searching for my first and last name on a search engine (and who hasn't done that?), great was my surprise to find not only that old rulebook I had sent *[the site has since disappeared, as it was hosted on Geocities]*, but also its translations [in English](http://www.di.fc.ul.pt/~jpn/gv/doh.htm) and [in Czech](http://www.deskovehry.info/pravidla/doh.htm) on sites specialized in board games, and [myself listed in lists of board game inventors](http://www.abstractstrategy.com/authors-v.html)…
+Years later, searching for my full name on a search engine (and who hasn't done that?), great was my surprise to find not only that old rulebook I had sent *[the site has since disappeared, as it was hosted on Geocities]*, but also its translations [in English](http://www.di.fc.ul.pt/~jpn/gv/doh.htm) and [in Czech](http://www.deskovehry.info/pravidla/doh.htm) on sites specialized in board games, and [myself listed in lists of board game inventors](http://www.abstractstrategy.com/authors-v.html)…
 
 Here are the rules of the game: